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Offline KingDavid
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« Reply #40 on: May 7, 2011 08:40 AM »
I goto NSCC truro. No it's not the absolute best but it'll get me a job in the industry (fingers cross lol). And I do appreciate the criticism. I thought I executed the penny punch nicely IMO, but I can see a different route I could have taken for the penny pull. I made the action realistic for the character, and I could have squashed and squished him more,but I find the way I choose to go created a nice sense of flow, but it could possibly have been better if i exaggerated the squash and stretch=P Also you are right about it being to short for sure ! I did not have time to really give this movie the ending I wanted like RTIL said. I'm actually going to probably re release this with this ending * after the truck drivesoff you see buddy walking away angrily and he sees the penny- and figures fuck it mightazwell take it now, then it cuts to pico driving in his truck and hepresses a button, it then shows the kid getting blown to bits, and a mushroom cloud through pico's rearview and he goes
"What!? You never heard of penny bomb before !?!?!" :P

and RTIL yea I know about slow in / out and I really didn't have enough stuff like that on that reel. Gonna def apply it better to future anims along with more exaggerated squash and squish with better character models.^^
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and muse isnt that great anyway
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« Reply #41 on: May 7, 2011 02:53 PM »
The industry has awful standards these days, but this was below even that. It's ugly, unappealing and not fun to watch. I'm pretty sure you can do better than this. You SHOULD be able to do better than this, because you're not as god-awful and shitty at every fucking thing you do like Gerkinman is, but you have the same backwards retarded WELL SOMEBODY ELSE WHO GIVES ME MONEY SAID IT WAS GOOD SO THEREFORE IT IS bullshit, except you're paying money instead of receiving so it is far more dubious.

If somebody gives a hooker money to suck their dick, she's going to tell them their sweaty ballsack tastes like strawberries whether it does or not. She doesn't give a shit, it's just another out of a thousand.

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« Reply #42 on: May 9, 2011 04:10 PM »
word bro im sure ill be making toons youll like by me soon ^^
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it sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve