G3no's Box

 

regarding top right sniper girl, the individual-boob-fitting spandex is bothering me because there doesn't appear to be any indication that those parts of the suit are separated properly in order to allow that to happen. if it's a simple spandex suit that's a single piece (which it appears to be), the material would not fit the form quite that tightly unless all the air was sucked out of the suit after it was put on. there's still a contour but it's not as defined, and the material never makes it to the folds underneath the breasts. here's a decent example

i think you've called me out 1 time before this for something similar, so this is strike 2.  gotta memorize

just keep a reference handy when you're doing an outfit, it's always useful to glance at it every once in a while to make sure you're doing the material justice

I like the way it looks...

rtil is right, but my inner fetishist says le boobs are good.

I will go inside your belly button with technology (if you catch my drift).

Also nice pics I guess.

this  is from web show that is kind of cringy, but i just wanted to draw the main character

it's called " Golpea Duro Hara"   " Hit Hard Hara"   it's from Chile.  the show has charisma but... it can be  cringy i only saw 1 episode

It... It  feels off for some reason, also the right foot seems to be much bigger than the left foot. The colors are very enjoyable though.

foreshortening , having difficulties

i think the feet are ok in their size but the extended leg and angle of the foot is quite extreme and looks a bit broken. i do not think the foot could be bent that far on the extended kick

YES, now i get it

full http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/267/6/1/divine_by_g_3_n_o-d80emwm.png

the individual elements of this are pretty cool but i can't tell what the focus of the composition is supposed to be. i feel like it's supposed to be the demon girl and the lightning guy, but the very bright light coming from the sun rising over the earth is competing with the contrast on them. these kinds of paintings with many characters can be difficult to plan out, but overall i think you did a lot better than most people would

yeah im not really sure whats going on lol

but fuck it looks good, dat demon Ellie

ayyyyy he's back

I get whats going on and its really tight but there is a lot going on and yea it's hard to find a point to focus on. If you want the god and demoness to stand out more just contrast them a bit more with their surrounding elements might work. Use some artistic licensing. Right now they're sort of getting lost/competing with their little companions they summoned since they have similar color and tone. It definitely is illustrating two opposing forces however try to break up the characters you want the viewer to focus on a little more.

Or maybe do something else I don't know

Actually looking at it again it looks like you did sort of alter the tone between demoness and her little underlings but I spose it could use something else to make her pop. Also them being the smallest elements in the picture might make it sort of tough but you can probably do it ok

Also I like the smoke coming out of the demoness's mouth it's a nice touch.