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Title: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on January 16, 2016 05:46 AM
hey. i guess this is where i post art and stuff if anybody wants to look at it. personally i think it's really sketchy and i really really want to move away from that and towards 'finished' stuff. i don't really know how to do that, so if you have any feedback or whatever on that, as well as anything i post in here please please help me because i love to improve.
(http://i.imgur.com/G9bNVY7.png)(http://i.imgur.com/4NPQEGO.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/puyHAi1.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/h3oRyka.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/0iRCSeI.png)
(https://scontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-xpf1/v/t34.0-12/12527634_10208900599420247_1690618319_n.jpg?oh=d20d277df5e3d4435897a71110df1720&oe=569C4275)

thanks/sorry. ive never done this before
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: d-floe on January 16, 2016 05:56 AM
Nice job at finally making a thread you dip. I like your drawings do more
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Post by: Bamyasi on January 16, 2016 06:17 AM
Nice Bill Murray.
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Post by: rtil on January 16, 2016 06:17 AM
if you want to finish something just take a sketch you like, clean up the linework, make a composition (which usually involves a background) and start painting. crudely speaking, anyway
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: crackers on January 16, 2016 11:51 AM
Hi, this is a really nice and diverse selection of sketches! Keep up the good work!
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Post by: zwimmy on January 16, 2016 11:55 AM
your art is better than ok!
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Post by: Jon on January 17, 2016 12:56 AM
thank you all. i promise to keep at it weeaaauhjhm,.l

(http://i.imgur.com/Lg0XGyX.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/4LqdPIY.png)
tried to go from a sketch thing to a 'finished' thing but i dont really know how i feel about it
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: BluPhoenix on January 17, 2016 08:25 AM
linework could stand some further cleaning

but ya its nice i like it!!
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: ExBerian on January 17, 2016 09:14 AM
You did a really nice job on the shading for the tree, and really nice eye for that subtle shading on Deer-guy.
Btw what is that little cuties name?
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: d-floe on January 17, 2016 09:47 AM
That tree really reminds me of Soup
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Post by: zwimmy on January 17, 2016 10:00 AM
That tree really reminds me of Soup
lol same

it's gr8
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: SrsSam77 on January 17, 2016 10:10 AM
I like this and you left it at a really good level considering the trouble you said you had with it, do more and become a better soup than soup
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: mealguien on January 17, 2016 11:18 AM
The "bark lines", I guess you could call them, still do look like strokes. It kind of distracts me.

Overall, tho, I like it. Your art style is P neat.
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: valiums on January 17, 2016 12:15 PM
Your art is indeed very ok.
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Post by: crackers on January 17, 2016 02:29 PM
I like this and you left it at a really good level considering the trouble you said you had with it, do more and become a better soup than soup

do you have something against me i mean do you have something against soup
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: soup on January 17, 2016 03:35 PM
ive been rumbled
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: soup on January 17, 2016 03:37 PM
also really nice work, there are elements of the sketch i really prefer though

i think its the crispness of it and the heavy line weight around the eye its got a very illustrative look that is unfortunately lost a bit when you attempt to "clean it up"
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: Binary_2 on January 17, 2016 08:05 PM
Elm you finally made a thread. Keep drawin and improving!


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Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: Jon on January 20, 2016 05:35 AM
thank you everyone for being honest about how you feel
(http://i.imgur.com/EFnU5rY.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/tlGXWdn.png)

struggling with the whole color, lighting, painting thing, wishing to know the best way to develop those skills more.

Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: Jon on January 21, 2016 11:31 PM
painting paintventures trying how figure out how to paint
(http://i.imgur.com/EFmM3jB.png)
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: d-floe on January 22, 2016 04:17 AM
Painting is very hard, keep it up
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Post by: valiums on January 22, 2016 05:01 PM
10/10 potato
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Post by: Stu4U on January 24, 2016 03:41 AM
i like these alot c: your stuff is like Parappa the Rapper with a hint of Don't Starve, both of which have very charming styles
Title: Re: my art is ok
Post by: Jon on February 1, 2016 10:59 PM
thank you stu an everyone
made a thingy for a friend and some doodleroonis

(http://i.imgur.com/3svl7rv.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/WAFfJUd.png)(http://i.imgur.com/8YVqt25.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/O1l5kJr.png)
wwww
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: ExBerian on February 2, 2016 07:09 AM
Good Cummies hand contours.
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Post by: BluPhoenix on February 2, 2016 11:08 AM
you should draw more bill murray
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on February 17, 2016 11:36 PM
did a study portrait recreation thngy of guitarist manhttp://i.imgur.com/jCIflah.jpg (http://i.imgur.com/jCIflah.jpg) from 'the deerhunters' feedback appreciated

(http://i.imgur.com/vPLIdXH.png)
bonus: this thing
(http://i.imgur.com/8DQJSvs.png)
double bonus: doodles
(http://i.imgur.com/bJ1BjEy.png)
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: d-floe on February 18, 2016 05:38 AM
The study looks nice but i think you forgot to define the shape of the nose which is why it looks off
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Post by: rtil on February 18, 2016 06:18 AM
i like the directional hatching
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on February 18, 2016 01:25 PM
thanks, i don't know if i should use that in every painting situation but if it looks good it looks good i guess
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on March 10, 2016 10:44 PM
(http://i.imgur.com/iRHZNpt.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/QwgAC64.png)
burn the fuel
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: rtil on March 10, 2016 10:59 PM
i already gave you feedback on the last one, but the deer is nice. the directional hatching is working well there, it's a bit scribbly but mostly there
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on March 10, 2016 11:27 PM
emoji of the 'okey dokey' hand
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Post by: zwimmy on March 13, 2016 11:03 PM
emoji of the 'okey dokey' hand
x3
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on October 19, 2016 02:44 PM
(http://i.imgur.com/ZeJHoLJ.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/krQUzeo.png)(http://i.imgur.com/PMv7l9M.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/GtlWcfF.png)
constructive/negative comments preferred
tbh im not really sure what the end goal wtih 'studying' is or what im supposed to be actively learning but it's fun. what do you guys try to 'learn'? do you guys try to go for a balance of studies and original arts? the two compliment each other, don't they?
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: rtil on October 19, 2016 06:02 PM
as long as you feel like you learned something then you did. when i do a new piece i try to focus specifically on a certain weakness of mine

Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on October 19, 2016 09:00 PM
did those hands are freaking me the fuck out

good job
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 9, 2016 07:02 PM
(http://i.imgur.com/XYAw7ZJ.png) wait lifting, trying to make the ligtht come from above and tryin ta make the girls head all tilded back like idk........ let me know what you think ok?? what you have done/not done bye. i love you.

Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on November 9, 2016 08:14 PM
post some of those ribcages I know you draw 3000 a day so I want to see them ribcages in the next 7 dimensions
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on November 9, 2016 08:39 PM
Is that first painting a film shot study or from imagination, either way you need to tell kizu and his sameface ladies to fuck themselves with a rake next time he calls you unimaginative
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 9, 2016 08:41 PM
Is that first painting a film shot study or from imagination, either way you need to tell kizu and his sameface ladies to fuck themselves with a rake next time he calls you unimaginative

i drew a bunch of them yeh but they were small and pretty undetailed so w/e imo. please critique the drawing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im going to post my art thru this reply to you!

study i did. yehs (http://i.imgur.com/Fs57BGn.jpg)
 i tried to make a cartoon dog dat didnt look scary. rtil liked it. sort of. winning? (http://i.imgur.com/HdF1X7P.png)
i bet the anatomy on this one is a real doozy. and the lighting, loooll  (http://i.imgur.com/hIGl3am.png) btw that pic is nsfw
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: rtil on November 9, 2016 11:15 PM
you can use [nsfw] tag to create a nsfw img with an overlay on top of it people can click to reveal. the hips should probably be wider on that , but i think what makes it look a bit odd is the very cartoonish animal head and hands on a mostly realistic human body
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 10, 2016 07:19 AM
yea I feel like it's pretty cringy,I guess I have more of an idea of what not to do Which is good. Thanks for posting!
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Post by: soup on November 10, 2016 08:17 AM
there's an impressive sense of scale in the study, really cool earthy colors and tones

ur cartoon dogs are v cute please continue to draw adorable cartoon animals

Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 13, 2016 08:44 PM
thankz i will try

pretty dissatisfied with dis tbh but idk ill try to improve on it tomorrow speedwize and resultwize ps i hate how smudgy and gay it is i feel like i could do better with sai in that aspect, but i suppose photoshop will show me its true potential  hahahah.. share your thoughts and criticisms.. is quantity better than quality...?? i wanna do more than one of these in a single day... time...

(http://i.imgur.com/xuqX1rl.png)
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on November 13, 2016 09:14 PM
how long did this take you is my preliminary question
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 14, 2016 08:08 AM
too long...srsly I think it was about 4 hrs and most of it was battling
The tones to make it not look all smudge...I was also in discord call so that prob didn't help...
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on November 14, 2016 08:27 AM
yeah I was going to say, 4 hours looks much too long, without the discord call I'd say it should probably only have taken you about 30-40 mins
The read is just a tad hazy because there isn't much value variation on the body even though it is in shadow, and the edges are rough and need control

my most immediate advice to you is to throw down a solid mid-tone on the entire canvas the moment you start a new one, white backgrounds will always throw off your values/tones/colors when you're starting out, I'd also advise you do more of these studies and work on your value/color blending IN ADDITION to paying heed to subsurface scattering in human bodies

gl hf m80
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on November 14, 2016 08:33 PM
thank you very much sam. i tried your mid-town canvas idea and i can honestly say i wish i knew to do that a long time ago, but i'm glad i know now. i am still having trouble blending my values. i have no idea how you can knock these out and have them photorealstic in 40 minutes, but i think i can get to that point, even if im not quite 'finishing' them yet. am i lame enough yet LoL. these were timed for 45 minutes but i cheated on the second one.

(http://i.imgur.com/1vomkNl.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/cwYXxf4.png)

im getting addicted to posting on here.
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: SrsSam77 on November 14, 2016 08:59 PM
you take-a da brush and you set-a the opacity a-down so it does the thing-a yo mamma tells yous about

so, set the opacity on the brush low, then blend the two areas you want to blend together, because the opacity is low it will darken/lighten the other value you're blending which allows you to do the walk back that ends in a smooth value gradiation

I also personally enjoy using low opacities for lifting up or darkening certain swathes of value/color in a painting
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on January 15, 2017 08:17 PM
spoiler = nsfw/gay
(http://i.imgur.com/r5MjNo0.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/MnF1i6M.png)
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(http://i.imgur.com/RX2O9Sh.png)
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(http://i.imgur.com/3FUWKD2.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/NGlybOH.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/MAtm5l9.png) (study)
(http://i.imgur.com/US7dLw0.png)

what i learned: getting better at textures and using brushes, i feel more happy with myself when i color  things and make original stuff, i feel like in order to get much better i must do that, more perspective pieces and backgrounds for this month, more colors, more portfolio worthy ventures. i think that the unfinished perspective picture is the most challenging thing i ever attempted. overall i feel pretty proud of myself but what are your thoughts, you.
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: soup on January 15, 2017 09:07 PM
fucking hell those are some impressive studies well done dude seriously

i honestly want to know have you been following any kind of schedule that goes beyond just "pick an image and do some studies"?
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on January 15, 2017 11:46 PM
i just make a note to work on a study at least everyday. i try to get one done per day but that feels out of my skill range right now but i know some people do it. there's a daily thing people do on the conceptart.org forums? ever go there? thoughts on it? (are there any good art forums out there i should know about?)

personally i have mixed feelings about studies. i know they're essential for gaining skill but i feel like they're kind of moot if you don't challenge yourself into making something original out of what you've learned. i feel like i haven't transformed the studies into an original thing and i've squandered whatever knowledge i've gained from it. i secretly hope that's not the case! i feel like i've improved but i'm still gonna try to make more original stuff to protect my mind. i feel like it'll help me get better faster along with my studies. do you think my studies and my original stuff is too far apart quality wise? any favourites or least favourites? do you like studying yourself? do you study things you hate? do you 'endure' studying? how much of drawing is 'enduring' vs 'fun'? what's more important? do the two become one for you?
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: soup on January 16, 2017 12:26 AM
(http://i.imgur.com/MnF1i6M.png)

theres just something about this dude thats so chipper i think hed be my fave. ya really did him justice

theres a lot of really nice texture going on in your studies as well that adds that extra bit of depth. I think the studies translate well into your style, even if its a little simpler it certainly looks far more "solid" than a lot of work i see online, and im sure that must be because youve got a strong knowledge of the fundamentals. even if you havent done anything "original" that youre happy with yet its all adding to a visual library that will make your work look that bit more believable

after i did some thinking i realised i wasnt happy with the quality of my work at all so ive essentially dropped everything i do online indefinitely. i see no real reason to go back tbh. instead i do a study a day and ive been practicing with more traditional media, while looking more into the fundamentals . i can already say its pushed me to learn far more already than just churning out the same dull stuff and learning nothing, and that feels pretty rewarding!
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on March 4, 2017 01:46 AM
thanks man i feel like im really starting to find a good pace with my art, i am psyched that your comics are making such waves i still need to try and get my humor out there im jealous but its a legitimately a beautiful thing to see you fill a void with your brand of humor like that heh

im gonna take a page out of that book because it sounds fulfilling as all hell

doing studies everyday, enrolled in a schoolism class for light and i was asked to do 5 studies that study on natural neutral light and whatnot. figuring out brushes and textures

(http://i.imgur.com/rebsEIx.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/MLI3NFa.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/eHoLQ0w.jpg)




Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: dilly on March 7, 2017 06:06 PM
i like how you can sense the texture through the simplicity! very nice!
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on August 31, 2017 11:10 PM
(https://68.media.tumblr.com/40e9d38e71b33091f00d1b3a62ba7a21/tumblr_ov5xo8PZ3w1uw3i9go1_1280.png)
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(https://68.media.tumblr.com/4e604f9c4168776899c81a53c80b297d/tumblr_oviphzUVR71uw3i9go1_1280.png)
(https://68.media.tumblr.com/db400775310e0634523626d53dea372d/tumblr_ovl73k61Cy1uw3i9go1_1280.png)

comics
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Post by: Yvonne on September 1, 2017 10:42 AM
Eeeeeeeee!
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: nuac_ on September 1, 2017 03:12 PM
Quote
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loled 5/5
Title: Re: artrocity exhibition
Post by: Jon on September 12, 2017 12:46 AM
(https://68.media.tumblr.com/eaca9027b309b91b457d253c536a40f9/tumblr_ovmhzdrlow1uw3i9go1_1280.png)

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(https://i.imgur.com/6ha5S0b.png)
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he he