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Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: trent bortknob on February 26, 2007 05:57 PM
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Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Eruanne on February 26, 2007 06:04 PM
if you didn't want us to click, why are you asking for feedback?


Anyway, the style is good, and I like the color tones and shading. The look of paranoia makes a good touch. I like it.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: dilly on February 26, 2007 06:09 PM
I like the shading for the hair and in the face
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Eruanne on February 26, 2007 06:27 PM
a good improvement. You're doing well, young padawan.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: rtil on February 26, 2007 11:23 PM
skin tones are pretty bad, try choosing colors closer to white and more redish/yellowish, like very light peaches.

your shadows are hardly even readable, don't be afraid to choose much darker colors for tones, otherwise it's not even worth bothering.

and just because you're working in photoshop doesn't mean you have to soften every damn tone you make. you're used to vector coloring in flash, and don't be afraid to do that in photoshop as well. you work in painting software by laying down the shapes of color first, then you smooth them out if you desire the look.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Dagolith on February 27, 2007 09:42 AM
the term, "he's white" is not literal.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Shida on February 27, 2007 11:31 AM
He looks more purply-lilac than 'white', like he's stopped breathing or something.
Like rtil said, the shadows are too light, and you need to use more (like on the inside of the ear - it tends to be darker) as well as perhaps using reference to make the shadows and highlights seem a bit more realistically placed ('specially on the hair).
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Dagolith on February 27, 2007 01:21 PM
mabey one of our screens, monitors, what have you. is messed, because i'm seeing it in Grey and white.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Shida on February 27, 2007 01:37 PM
It's probably my own eyes. I frequently confuse light grey for a light lilac colour and vice versa. It gets on my nerves sometimes, because it happens with really light browns too.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: Dagolith on February 27, 2007 02:02 PM
i know how you feel, i do the same thing with dark blue and black, i can't for the life of me, tell the difference.
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: rtil on February 28, 2007 04:29 PM
you'll get better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  
Title: PHOTOSHOP SHIT DON'T CLICK
Post by: 2poc on March 29, 2007 08:59 PM
Yah its good