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« Reply #20 on: October 17, 2014 08:47 AM »
I really like your style and use of coloring, especially on the monster and the girl's eyes! The only thing I would suggest would be to smooth out some of your lines, especially around her left shoulder and her knees to create a more rounder, smoother appearance rather than a blocky one. This is probably just because it's a WIP, but I think smoothing those out will compliment your colors.

I'd also perk up her left boob a little bit just so that it matches the fullness of the other. Right now, it looks a little squished to me! Let them puppies breathe!

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« Reply #21 on: October 17, 2014 09:30 AM »
I really like your style and use of coloring, especially on the monster and the girl's eyes! The only thing I would suggest would be to smooth out some of your lines, especially around her left shoulder and her knees to create a more rounder, smoother appearance rather than a blocky one. This is probably just because it's a WIP, but I think smoothing those out will compliment your colors.

I'd also perk up her left boob a little bit just so that it matches the fullness of the other. Right now, it looks a little squished to me! Let them puppies breathe!


Thank you for the feedback! I'll be cleaning up the lines soon and you couldn't be more right about her boob.  I just couldn't see it for some reason. Thank you! :D

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« Reply #22 on: October 28, 2014 10:04 PM »
Some gesture drawing I started doing at the advice of everyone.  These are about 120 second sketches.








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« Reply #23 on: October 28, 2014 11:42 PM »
very nice, good form. i'd like to see you experiment more with your linework, maybe using hatching in place of some lines where things taper, or using the side of your pencil to block in quick shading for volume. it will help you budget your linework even more and find out which shapes are the most important to block in

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« Reply #24 on: October 29, 2014 04:14 AM »
Mmmmmmmm budgets and shapes
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« Reply #25 on: October 29, 2014 06:40 PM »
TL;DR git gud, git motivated, make dolla bills yall

Wisdom.

Also, another sketch I had fun with today.
Edit: Myrrah again. 

« Last Edit: October 29, 2014 11:05 PM by tyvb »

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« Reply #26 on: October 29, 2014 08:34 PM »
I really like the details you put into this sketch! it almost doesn't need color to make it stand out. The only thing that seems off to me is her feet look a little smaller than the rest of her proportions, but what do I know!!!!

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« Reply #27 on: October 29, 2014 09:08 PM »
You're right on that one; the feet are indeed small.  I got nervous about the feet for some reason and ended up being tiny.  I've noticed that the less confident I am in my drawing, the smaller whatever I'm drawing turns out.  I should stop that ;w;
By the way, I'm not sensitive to critiques.  I want to hear this kind of stuff!  I don't think there is any sense in being buttmad about a legitimate criticism, especially if I drew something wrong.  Its how I learn!  :D

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« Reply #28 on: October 30, 2014 08:15 PM »
woaaa thats fuckin good

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« Reply #29 on: November 25, 2014 11:51 AM »


A couple of doodles I made for a friend.  Fiona and Huntress Wizard.
I new realize that I need more practice with hands, and that bump doesn't belong of Fiona's hip.

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« Reply #30 on: November 25, 2014 06:28 PM »
Looks cute! Nice to see you posting again!

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« Reply #31 on: November 25, 2014 07:06 PM »
Looks cute! Nice to see you posting again!

I was lamenting over the death of my tablet pen.;w;

Also, thank you!

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« Reply #32 on: December 30, 2014 06:25 PM »
WIP


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« Reply #33 on: December 30, 2014 06:56 PM »
my only complaint is that i don't think that a hat like that would wrap underneath the chin like that, unless it has some kind of grip on the chin. it should thin out as it reaches the bottom of the chin, like a pinch. think about how the fabric would wrap around the jawline. hope that makes sense.

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« Reply #34 on: November 11, 2016 04:41 PM »


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